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Deer Girl's avatar

Photo: blue hour in Devon, England.

Janet Brown's avatar

Playing at murder!

Deer Girl's avatar

My cat enjoys that game too… :-(

Janet Brown's avatar

I immediately thought of the savagery of kittens! (Good thing they're small.)

Elaine elfEars's avatar

Lordy, lordy, do they ever! I've always said cats' motto is: If it move, kill it.

Deer Girl's avatar

Seriously. My cat sometimes drags pigeons and crows in. She just cannot see a moving thing without getting murderous!

Elaine elfEars's avatar

Good lord!! That must be SOME kitty of yours that can snag an intelligent crow.

You sound like me, Deer. I sign off with cats on the same covenant I share with whomever I love: I won't constrain your freedom; you won't constrain mine. I don't force any cat to be confined indoors, not even for their own "safety". Every spirit that is born into this world has a destined time to die, in my understanding. And I don't agree with those who say we have to keep cats indoors to protect endangered birds. The cats did not create the conditions that led to their endangerment. If you want to solve that problem, maybe you ought to confine the human race indoors. 😊

Deer Girl's avatar

She’s a Bengal cat – I think they are particularly skilled hunters, because none of my other cats have come anywhere close in terms of hunting. I didn’t realise how good they were hunting before I got her. We did put an anti-hunting collar on her which has helped a bit. It’s brightly coloured. She looks quite snazzy in it as well!

Elaine elfEars's avatar

They are certainly as beautiful as they are skillful!! 💜

Character Cognition's avatar

This is excellent.

I've always envied this about the wild:

*I thought: look how simple it is, to just go forward into what you are.*

Deer Girl's avatar

Thank you! I know what you mean. I often think about the way that animals are able to be in the present, and in ‘themselves’, in a way that we are not.

frank (*)'s avatar

Yep.. they live their entire lives without regret.. never looking back, always eyes forward... accepting nature's next challenge.

* as always thanks for this brief moment.

Deer Girl's avatar

Thank you for reading! 🖤

angelette's avatar

"If you crush a blue jay feather it turns brown. The blue was in the looking. What’s left is what was always there – brown and dutiful, the truth of the thing." I love this!!! 💙

Deer Girl's avatar

Thank you! I recently read that about the feathers – thought it was such a cool fact 🩵

Joe's avatar

I like this. You’re all dressed up, you’ve driven to say a wedding but you’re alone and filled with trepidation. You see these fox cubs and they give you courage. You gotta live your life.

Deer Girl's avatar

Thank you, Joe – I really like this interpretation!

Elaine elfEars's avatar

ESPECIALLY if it's you driving to your own wedding (in the darkness before dawn, it's a long drive), and your turn around and go back home so you can "live your own life". (Sorry, Joe, the idea of weddings and such always brings out my sense of "guy humor".

Ray Zimmerman's avatar

Love this piece.

Deer Girl's avatar

Thank you Ray :-)

Gan's avatar

your words always land like a velvet hammer

Deer Girl's avatar

A velvet hammer! I love that – thank you.

Rebecca Harrison's avatar

Oh I love love ‘the rabbit kick of my own heart’.

Deer Girl's avatar

Thank you Rebecca! 🐇

Sunny's avatar

This observation was wonderful. How you view the natural world. Your poetry was beautiful! 😍 Ty.

Deer Girl's avatar

Thank you Sunny! Very much appreciated 💛

Sunny's avatar

Thank YOU! 🦌

Lynn's avatar

You could make that into one of those children’s books we cherish our whole lives

Deer Girl's avatar

I’ve never written anything for children; I quite like the idea of it though! 🩵

Jay Gilman's avatar

It seems that you've managed to write for adults who've retained authentic connection with the child within themselves, their essence, to the extent that current dissonance resonates. In other words, lovely, nuanced, soft and impactfull authentic writng.

Deer Girl's avatar

Thank you – I really appreciate this comment. I do try and find ways to show bits of wonder within the mundane, or the tenderness/joy that can exist alongside harder aspects of life.

Libertarian's avatar

I very much agree with Lynn on this.

Elaine elfEars's avatar

Yep. The role model of the female fox cub, a true treasure

Stephanie M. Vargo's avatar

Wonderfull

Deer Girl's avatar

Thank you very much Stephanie <3

MA Knight's avatar

Lovely

Deer Girl's avatar

Thank you!

Rebecca Cook's avatar

gorgeous

Deer Girl's avatar

Thank you Rebecca! 🩵

Mancee Elendew's avatar

Beauty really is in the eye of the beholder...

Loved this piece so much.

Deer Girl's avatar

Thank you very much Mancee! <3

pen n. bolsillo's avatar

the mystery of the thing. the becoming of the thing. the truth of the thing. so many emotions.

Deer Girl's avatar

Thanks Pen :-)

Douglas Bruton's avatar

Oh now, this is so very beautiful and full of the most wonderful language. Loved it into the dark and back again. x

Deer Girl's avatar

Thank you so much Douglas! 🖤